Saturday, October 12, 2013

New 'ku: robots are the best

My latest 5-7-5 scifaiku is traditional, complete with subject, season, and action, and contains (what I believe is) a clever pun.  The first two lines came to me easily, but the final line did not come to me until a day later.  That was a career first--I usually just dash them off.  I'm sure Bender (pictured) would appreciate this one.

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