While I do admire Ms. Lingen's bold attempt at using the device of short cycles of storytelling followed by relatively long interruptions, I found the interruptions too numerous and too intrusive. Spacing them out more would have resulted in a less disjointed, more successful story. 2 out of 7 rocket-dragons.
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Tuesday, May 14, 2013
Review of "The Troll (A Tale Told Collectively)" by Marissa Lingen
While I do admire Ms. Lingen's bold attempt at using the device of short cycles of storytelling followed by relatively long interruptions, I found the interruptions too numerous and too intrusive. Spacing them out more would have resulted in a less disjointed, more successful story. 2 out of 7 rocket-dragons.
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