This story is well-paced and builds suspense and mystery expertly. Too bad second person POV was chosen--the story would have been much more powerful in third person--you know what I mean. The end, while ironic and delicious, does present a bit of a conundrum. Nevertheless, it is so original and entertaining that I will award it 5 out of 7 rocket-dragons.
Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Review of "Holy Diver" by Grá Linnaea
This story is well-paced and builds suspense and mystery expertly. Too bad second person POV was chosen--the story would have been much more powerful in third person--you know what I mean. The end, while ironic and delicious, does present a bit of a conundrum. Nevertheless, it is so original and entertaining that I will award it 5 out of 7 rocket-dragons.
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