Tuesday, December 22, 2015

Poem of the Day: “Monkeys with Typewriters” by Christopher Hivner

Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present “Monkeys with Typewriters” by Christopher Hivner.  A brief biography of the poet may be found here: http://eretzsongs.blogspot.com/2015/12/poem-of-day-army-of-dreams-by.html.  

Monkeys with Typewriters
Christopher Hivner

My attempts to write
a love song to you
have ended in a
pile-up of distended words
with no life.
These derailed trains
of superannuated metaphors
lie at the bottom
of a canyon
burning out of control.

There will be no poem
detailing my affection for you
as I am incapable
of writing one
that doesn’t give me a headache.
The words I choose
mock me
with rolling eyes
and unintentional laughter,
turning my real emotion
into sardonic flotsam.

My profession of love
was to sound like Pablo Neruda,
but came out as a
Harlequin romance
generated by
monkeys with typewriters.
So the next time
we are together
I will give you a
wink and a nod,
a soft nudge in the side,
a raised eyebrow.
I will salute you
like the idiot I am
and you will know
you are loved.

Poet’s Notes: Pablo Neruda’s Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair is one of my favorite books, and Tonight I Can Write one of my favorite poems. During a writing session where I was experimenting with different styles I decided to try to write a love poem in the style of Neruda. For three days I tried. Every resulting piece was a disaster, which got trashed so I never had to look at it again. This led me to write “Monkeys with Typewriters” about my failed experiment.

Editor’s Note:  This one reminds me more of William Carlos Williams than Pablo Neruda, but it is good either way.  I particularly like the play on the word "salute" toward the end, though perhaps I just have a dirty mind. 

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